Hi @cbone!
Welcome to our feedback of 'drowning in these hollows'!
The lyrics are fire, nicely done!
Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics, you're missing the beat a few times. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential!
Good choice of beat!
Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Hi @cbone! Welcome to our feedback of 'drowning in these hollows'! The lyrics are fire, nicely done! Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics, you're missing the beat a few times. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential! Good choice of beat! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team