first attempt
Honest fkn jim70 Plays
•10 Jul 2021
almost an addict like everything i do is becoming a habit, im always out and always at it, n ill snatch and ill grab it, just feeding another habit, n when im feneing, like panic but not just at the disco, like everywhere i go cos if u didn't already know im kinda loco cos when shit dont go my way i go fkn physcho, then im in strife bro as we all know too well who ya tell when shits not real swell, and every time i fell i landed back on my feet as well and its just as well,cos god only knows where id be right now, oh wow...getting the picture now, paint it for u again and again it re write and re send and then try pretend it never makes it again and see if it dont offend me again cubt then we no longer friends not even foes only a few bros remain and my feelings for the hoes aint changed depends on the day and if the gear was ok, n if it is then it's safe to say i will stay n i may even play nice, we keep on sipping on wine till we b three blind mice thinking twince n saying no to more free ice, olus the skies the limit cos when u get it u give it, n this is life n we livit, forget or forgive it gets better n better the wisdom we adopt and some shit still gets forgot cos i still smoke shit loads of pot, keeps us so high, cos without the kush is like a seventies porn with no fkn bush screaming in the library when Im supposed to be quiet should try it like a tobacco ban riot another brain cell to fry yet n u can bet i wont fkn forget but oromise you will eventually regret deadset
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Hey @jamiecravino.973! Thanks for sharing 'first attempt ' with us! We think the delivery is mostly fire, keep it up. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. You may wanna work on timing a bit so that you sound the best over the beat, you just miss the beat a few times. Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! The beat is dope and really works for this track. It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
almost an addict like everything i do is becoming a habit, im always out and always at it, n ill snatch and ill grab it, just feeding another habit, n when im feneing, like panic but not just at the disco, like everywhere i go cos if u didn't already know im kinda loco cos when shit dont go my way i go fkn physcho, then im in strife bro as we all know too well who ya tell when shits not real swell, and every time i fell i landed back on my feet as well and its just as well,cos god only knows where id be right now, oh wow...getting the picture now, paint it for u again and again it re write and re send and then try pretend it never makes it again and see if it dont offend me again cubt then we no longer friends not even foes only a few bros remain and my feelings for the hoes aint changed depends on the day and if the gear was ok, n if it is then it's safe to say i will stay n i may even play nice, we keep on sipping on wine till we b three blind mice thinking twince n saying no to more free ice, olus the skies the limit cos when u get it u give it, n this is life n we livit, forget or forgive it gets better n better the wisdom we adopt and some shit still gets forgot cos i still smoke shit loads of pot, keeps us so high, cos without the kush is like a seventies porn with no fkn bush screaming in the library when Im supposed to be quiet should try it like a tobacco ban riot another brain cell to fry yet n u can bet i wont fkn forget but oromise you will eventually regret deadset
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