Brota omiko!
that's wat dey say wen I roll up with my people
my music is banging like ato onioh
got rap in a chokenhold
and I won't surrender it with
beat by rapfame
jafe dato joka my baby
all I wanna do is stroke you all crazy
my dick game is vicious and
insane at mammies dey
keep saying like leave my
daughter for me!
wen dey can't stop her from
checkin on me!
incase you don't know
this is Christon Oteezy!
fine girl clean face no pimples
damn! .....I love her dimples
that's bull shit mehn
i gotta hustle hard real talk no faking
the streets ain't funny
my nine in my hand
can't keep mind straight
open your fucking safe mehn
and don't blame me!
that is life in a ghetto
live or die!
Yo @oteezchriston!
Waddup - let's take a look at 'freestyle 1'!
We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track.
Your vocals are real quiet, could you put 'em up?
Good choice of beat! This is super chill, a real nice vibe. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there.
Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Brota omiko! that's wat dey say wen I roll up with my people my music is banging like ato onioh got rap in a chokenhold and I won't surrender it with beat by rapfame jafe dato joka my baby all I wanna do is stroke you all crazy my dick game is vicious and insane at mammies dey keep saying like leave my daughter for me! wen dey can't stop her from checkin on me! incase you don't know this is Christon Oteezy! fine girl clean face no pimples damn! .....I love her dimples that's bull shit mehn i gotta hustle hard real talk no faking the streets ain't funny my nine in my hand can't keep mind straight open your fucking safe mehn and don't blame me! that is life in a ghetto live or die!
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Here are my scores: Bars: 7/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: On point ๐ฏ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
@rapfame_ar_team sure I'm gonna fix that up, and thanks for the review
Yo @oteezchriston! Waddup - let's take a look at 'freestyle 1'! We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Your vocals are real quiet, could you put 'em up? Good choice of beat! This is super chill, a real nice vibe. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
@oteezchriston okay, can you check my new track
@netmad it's all good mehn, just chilling tryna keep me happy
@oteezchriston what up
@kilcoyne thanks ๐
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
hot man just his you killed it
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Great ๐ Impression: Great ๐
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
@netmad sure โ
@netmad wadd up
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Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ