Hi @minecraftdude.9985!
Welcome to our feedback of 'erster song'!
Your vocals are a great volume in the mix, nicely done.
Try workin' on the bars to get a fresh lyrical sound. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars.
The beat is dope and really works for this track. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire.
It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Hi @minecraftdude.9985! Welcome to our feedback of 'erster song'! Your vocals are a great volume in the mix, nicely done. Try workin' on the bars to get a fresh lyrical sound. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. The beat is dope and really works for this track. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team