DAFT FIVE (14:48)

Name: DAFT FIVE (14:48)
Description: Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.

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Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.

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Soloman knezek

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5 years ago

Bo Jangles

5 years ago

Please check out my music and let me know what you think about it Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Rap Fame A&R

5 years ago

Hi @loansarrow! Welcome to our feedback of 'DAFT FIVE (14:48)'! The beat is fire, nice choice. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Your voice is sounding a bit loud in the mix, you may wanna put it down a little. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. This track is too short, please share something a bit longer so we can give proper feedback! Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Mr. Bullet

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

4way

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Dope 🔥

Fola

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 7/10 Delivery: 7/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: On point 🎯 Delivery: On point 🎯 Impression: Dope 🔥

ChrisRobbers

2 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥