Yo @papers13!
Waddup - let's take a look at 'novice_'!
The beat is fire, nice choice.
Work on developing original bars to help your tracks shine through. Develop your story-telling to help your track shine through. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track!
Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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10/10/10 turn your vocals down a tad bit but everything else is Gucci famo 🤘
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Yo @papers13! Waddup - let's take a look at 'novice_'! The beat is fire, nice choice. Work on developing original bars to help your tracks shine through. Develop your story-telling to help your track shine through. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
🍻🍻🍻Dope Music Fam!!!!
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
cool track
keep it up