Hey @bowedbranches!
Thanks for sharing 'cam jam flow' with us!
The beat is dope and really works for this track.
Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Try improving your recording quality if you can.
Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire.
Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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My friend recorded me freestyling in between recording and edited my voice a bit...check it
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Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
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Hey @bowedbranches! Thanks for sharing 'cam jam flow' with us! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Try improving your recording quality if you can. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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