Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @jadonmongan! Welcome to our feedback of '911'! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Practice different effects on different tracks and see how things come out. It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Jadon Mongan

3 years ago

this is off the cuff while driving... #freestyle #911