Yo @mamaine!
Waddup - let's take a look at 'cookin bacon'!
The vocals sound great, nicely done! Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! The lyrics are fire, sizzlin' like that bacon you cookin' :)
Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, you may wanna put it up a little.
The rhyming is well put together, and we love the concept really made us smile. Nice flow here too- delivery is so important. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. Write it out into a full length track please, we want to hear the full version.
It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Yo @mamaine! Waddup - let's take a look at 'cookin bacon'! The vocals sound great, nicely done! Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! The lyrics are fire, sizzlin' like that bacon you cookin' :) Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, you may wanna put it up a little. The rhyming is well put together, and we love the concept really made us smile. Nice flow here too- delivery is so important. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. Write it out into a full length track please, we want to hear the full version. It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team