The Beginning - tavonchill
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•01 Jul 2021
Basically my name is Tavon came here to make a living this is just the beginning all tho,s haters see me making that paper they start apologizing But I Ain’t doing know forgiving let me keep this quick and simple I’m Tavon Nobody gonna stop me from spiting my bars Look at you flexing take yo cars to Mars simple man I’m Vibing to this beat man all this paper got them thinking I’m cheap bruh they don’t want smoke look it ain’t my fault you broke yea you think this just a joke
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Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Hey @tavonchill! Thanks for sharing 'The Beginning - tavonchill' with us! Your vocals are the perfect volume, nicely done. Work on your timing a little to make sure you hit the beat perfectly. The beat is dope and really works for this track. Real chill, we love this vibe! Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
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