Yo @j3_savage!
Waddup - let's take a look at 'J3 Savage-Dear Dad'!
We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story.
Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow.
The beat is dope and really works for this track.
Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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#putUdown Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Yo @j3_savage! Waddup - let's take a look at 'J3 Savage-Dear Dad'! We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. The beat is dope and really works for this track. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ