Yo @j3_savage!
Waddup - let's take a look at 'J3 Savage-Dear Dad'!
We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story.
Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow.
The beat is dope and really works for this track.
Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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#putUdown Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Yo @j3_savage! Waddup - let's take a look at 'J3 Savage-Dear Dad'! We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. The beat is dope and really works for this track. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥