hatas
Mr gangsta49 Plays
•27 Jun 2021
yo hatas on the dance floor when they try to rap they choke i wish all of em would croak now you awoke the dragon this aint no joke i told you to run folk!! see all the hatas dancin on the dancefloor it looks like there having a motherfucking stroke yo aint nothin you where a mistake my lyrics are well better than drakes stop rappin yo so bad that it will create a plague your worse than Lindsay lohans movie remakes stop spreading hate cmon im at your front door choose your fate you call me out for all my tracks being late see ya later mate ha ha
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Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Hey @hardcoregangsta! Thanks for sharing 'hatas' with us! Your vocals are a great volume in the mix, nicely done. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. The rhyming is well put together. Good choice of beat! Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
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