mufasir(poetry)

Tarun 11

Author

5 years ago

dil ki baatao ko dil me samet ke hum aage bad gye dheere dheere hum seediyan saari chad gaye kuch baatein hume gandi lagi toh hum chad gaye buri baaton ko saath me lekar woh sad gaye unhone kaha raat ko paani me chand dikhata hai tabhi yeh aashiq din me khyaal likhta hai kashti me naav dudmaga jaaegyi bin tere tu bas ek se waaqif hai vibhin roop mere jo sath me bitaai woh haseen lamhe the kaate bhi chubana band hojate ek samay पे dil se kehta hu khoon se likh deta pankti chaar me par yeh dil samajta nhi pyaar ke pyapar me kabhi dil maang ke dekh lena dildar se

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