Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo @liljunie! Waddup - let's take a look at 'pick up the pen'! Your vocals are the perfect level over the beat, keep mixing like that. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! The vocals sound great, nicely done! Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. Try improving your recording quality if you can. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Your timing is great, nicely done. Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

UbiquitousStiles

3 years ago

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Lil junior

3 years ago

Pick up the pen, Write down the lyrics that Come from your head Straight from the heart. Even the Best rappers ever had to Start Somewhere, Very far from the end. So pick up the pen. Write down the lyrics that Come to your mind. If you’re not serious, then You may never find The voice inside So once again, Yo pick up the pen.