life hard
SavageLife is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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Yo @youngnephewmame! Waddup - let's take a look at 'life hard '! Your vocals are the perfect volume, nicely done. The beat is dope and really works for this track. Your vocals are a little unclear, maybe try recording closer to the mic? The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Play around in your studio to find out how best to use different effects. You’re not quite on beat, we suggest workin on your timing a little. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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