Yo @whitegambit!
Waddup - let's take a look at 'light'!
The vocals sound great but using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Your bars are dope, we like how you put 'em all together.
Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix.
We like the rhyming, and you got a nice flow here - delivery is so important. Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it!
Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Yo @whitegambit! Waddup - let's take a look at 'light'! The vocals sound great but using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Your bars are dope, we like how you put 'em all together. Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix. We like the rhyming, and you got a nice flow here - delivery is so important. Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team