bout to burst

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bout to burst

i cant take this pain its so hard to live through the day and i cant get away all they wanna do is take and speak straight to your face alot of these people straight fake and im real to the core so fuck you whore imma do me can i get a little more appreciation for the things im anerexing while im flexing on these bitches im flexing gonna leave you second guessing

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5 years ago

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5 years ago

Yo @cameroncrabtree! Waddup - let's take a look at 'bout to burst'! Your vocals are a great volume in the mix, nicely done. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. This is a bit short, please share a longer track for us to review! Good choice of beat! Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

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