rough draft for contest need critizism

my baby is a ganstsr baby gangster is hsr name i love the way she she walks and her.and the way her thighs hips swing beautiful blond longest hair that ive ever seen french tips caressin over me askin if im needing. anything i say no just your body baby i need that every day cook and clean and love me dont ever put no one above me look into my eyes and tell me that you trust me while whe kissin bubble bathin sippin champaine and we laughin toast glasses to thw life livin lavish baby. is a gangster and she know that she a baddie ass is fatty thighs thicknin quiver when im in the middle titties jiggle bouncing just little take its slow dig it in deep until feel her body tremble now you know she wanna scream so hit to the rythem of the beat garunttee u hit it like u neva finna see that shit again as squirmin across the bed beggin me . me to spank choke her l once she squirted on the pillow we started in the bathroom move in to middle on tbe0 sofa now the bedroom full