It’s the afterlife I’m a transparent soul from wood borrow yeah that’s right i’ve never been seen know what I mean yeah No one knows I’m here but I miss my dear I was walking down the street Going to have a meet is it clear black night no one was in sight then I heard a bang I felt a thang go through me I fell to the ground a bright White light I found in the sky shined upon me then I became blind Then I realized I have died
Yo @connormays!
Waddup - let's take a look at 'Afterlife '!
The vocals sound great, nicely done!
Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. This track is too short, please share something a bit longer so we can give proper feedback!
The beat is fire, nice choice. The recording is good quality, we can hear each element.
Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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It’s the afterlife I’m a transparent soul from wood borrow yeah that’s right i’ve never been seen know what I mean yeah No one knows I’m here but I miss my dear I was walking down the street Going to have a meet is it clear black night no one was in sight then I heard a bang I felt a thang go through me I fell to the ground a bright White light I found in the sky shined upon me then I became blind Then I realized I have died
I'm impatient to hear your next stuff 👌🏾😎🏹🌋 @elgoat
@connormays please comment check out my newest pinned track #HeyBabyGangster
Yo @connormays! Waddup - let's take a look at 'Afterlife '! The vocals sound great, nicely done! Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. This track is too short, please share something a bit longer so we can give proper feedback! The beat is fire, nice choice. The recording is good quality, we can hear each element. Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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really good
Thank you
The Afterlife