Yo @osaeokrah!
Waddup - let's take a look at 'sympathy '!
We think the delivery is fire, keep it up.
Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, you may wanna put it up a little. The vocals are a little unclear, you may wanna try recording closer to the mic to get a better sound. Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow.
Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: On point ๐ฏ Impression: Good ๐
Keep practicing g, improvement will come
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Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 5/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Good ๐ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Yo @osaeokrah! Waddup - let's take a look at 'sympathy '! We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, you may wanna put it up a little. The vocals are a little unclear, you may wanna try recording closer to the mic to get a better sound. Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 9/10 Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Great ๐ Impression: Great ๐
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Savage ๐ช SICK ๐ป Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Great ๐
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ