Rhaphell_After the hurt prod. by Veysigs
I know just how you feel right now, I know you're sad and crushed Can't adjust, to the fact he's gone. You're shattered, Mad as fuck as the man you once called Your love, stabbed you in the back and had the guts To treat you like you're trash when all you ever did was Love him, have his back, that and much more. Gave him all you got and not for a sec Did you think that he would break your heart to scraps and jots. I know right now you're in pain and it hurts, i know you blame yourself For letting him play with your heart as you try to forget The things he did, "distraction works" Now you're doing things you wouldn't do, but that's enough? Look! Think about it, i know right now your judgements Kinda clouded but don't let him have that much power over you I know it's not easy but it's not impossible The pain'll go away it's just gon take a lil time for you to Pick up the pieces and heal from the pain I know you're going through a lot, and its hard to explain How someone who you thought was the one Turned out to be reason for this fucking distrust. And why you'll probably never love again, now you're thinking All men are the same so you plan on just letting em have a taste You wanna retaliate by giving em just the same treatment But that only means you and him are just the same Love hurts And I know you feel much worse But don't let a man turn you into something you hate Don't let him turn you into someone you ain't I used to know of a girl, her name was Juliet Had a boyfriend, loved him way more than you would guess Totally devoted to what they had, not for a second Did she think that it wouldn't last. He was the perfect Guy, the man of her dreams. Showered her with affection Had her head over heels, but his only intention Was to get in her jeans, she didn't see it coming So she later agreed. An unforgettable night, she loved him more than before No regrets bout giving him her body and more. Now she was certain that she'd met the right one, she was sure Until the next day, when she paid him a visit. She knocked at the door, So excited, wanted to surprise him, Give him kisses and hugs, the love had got her blinded. The door opened and what she saw was frightening Another woman, naked and standing there right behind him. Her heart was broken to bits Broken to pieces, how was she suppose to believe That he would do it? Thought he was one of a kind And different, ain't no way she could have known he's a cheat. Now she's drinking, doing all sort of shit to get him Out of her system, out of her mind, to forget him Slowly she slipped into depression and wasn't thinking Till she made a - decision to put an end to the griefing...
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I know just how you feel right now, I know you're sad and crushed Can't adjust, to the fact he's gone. You're shattered, Mad as fuck as the man you once called Your love, stabbed you in the back and had the guts To treat you like you're trash when all you ever did was Love him, have his back, that and much more. Gave him all you got and not for a sec Did you think that he would break your heart to scraps and jots. I know right now you're in pain and it hurts, i know you blame yourself For letting him play with your heart as you try to forget The things he did, "distraction works" Now you're doing things you wouldn't do, but that's enough? Look! Think about it, i know right now your judgements Kinda clouded but don't let him have that much power over you I know it's not easy but it's not impossible The pain'll go away it's just gon take a lil time for you to Pick up the pieces and heal from the pain I know you're going through a lot, and its hard to explain How someone who you thought was the one Turned out to be reason for this fucking distrust. And why you'll probably never love again, now you're thinking All men are the same so you plan on just letting em have a taste You wanna retaliate by giving em just the same treatment But that only means you and him are just the same Love hurts And I know you feel much worse But don't let a man turn you into something you hate Don't let him turn you into someone you ain't I used to know of a girl, her name was Juliet Had a boyfriend, loved him way more than you would guess Totally devoted to what they had, not for a second Did she think that it wouldn't last. He was the perfect Guy, the man of her dreams. Showered her with affection Had her head over heels, but his only intention Was to get in her jeans, she didn't see it coming So she later agreed. An unforgettable night, she loved him more than before No regrets bout giving him her body and more. Now she was certain that she'd met the right one, she was sure Until the next day, when she paid him a visit. She knocked at the door, So excited, wanted to surprise him, Give him kisses and hugs, the love had got her blinded. The door opened and what she saw was frightening Another woman, naked and standing there right behind him. Her heart was broken to bits Broken to pieces, how was she suppose to believe That he would do it? Thought he was one of a kind And different, ain't no way she could have known he's a cheat. Now she's drinking, doing all sort of shit to get him Out of her system, out of her mind, to forget him Slowly she slipped into depression and wasn't thinking Till she made a - decision to put an end to the griefing...
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
@onastyjr thanks man
storytelling is impeccable bro! I love this man fr, A big sucker for lyricism.. You got it for sure π₯
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Thanks a lot to everyone that listened @rapfame_ar_team @shawnmoniz @nadawnxr @slim_wise01 @isaac and everyone who liked the song, I really appreciate it.
Yo @rhaphell! Waddup - let's take a look at 'Rhaphell_After the hurt prod. by Veysigs'! Your vocals are really clear, that's amazing! The rhyming is well put together. Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. The beat is dope and really works for this track. The recording is solid, everything is clear. We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
@nadawnxr thanks a bunch, I really appreciate it
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
I love this jam
this is ma best soo far
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