Tyran Dailey

3 years ago

thank you for taking the time to hear me and that great advice it really uplifted and motivated me on a whole new level plus it was just a freestyle rite off the top of the dome which most of my works will be i need all the critiques and criticisms to help for the betterment of my art@rapfameA&R

Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @tyrandailey! Thanks for sharing 'struggle' with us! Nice meaning behind the track! Try workin' on rhymes to get a unique sound. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Good choice of beat! We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Tyran Dailey

3 years ago

tryna stick in thru the struggle mouth closed tight like a dog wit a muzzle life is a game more like a puzzle where certain pieces tend to fit wit each other i did 13 a bakers dozen eyes wide shut like im stevie wonder but i still see and keep getting number so its hard to feel something for another idone walked thru the valley all on my own destined to be the king so theres more trouble kept my head held up high no pressure tired self sabotage and self deatruction