if only

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if only

if only my light would shine and I would try harder

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5 years ago

See track description

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5 months ago

Yo they gave me a copyright when this is my song Wtf

5 years ago

i was drunk when i made this🤣🤟🏽🙏🏽🖤🤦🏻‍♂️💯💯💯🎼

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5 years ago

Yo @mrlonely777! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'if only'! 💥 Your bars are real good, keep doin' what your doin'. 🙌 Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. 🎶 You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. 🙏 We like how the beat sounds with your voice. 🎼 See if you can clean up the recording quality, it's not helping the track. You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. 🤟 We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

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5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

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#HellaHEADNOD Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

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5 years ago

Perfect 👍 hmm please check my new stuff "Check sense". l will be very happy if you hit that like button. l appreciate the love and support. Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

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5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

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5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

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Author
5 years ago

because of "the way I think or talk" or the way I look or walk😂🤦🏼‍♂️ o geez its messed up

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Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

7 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

5 years ago

Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Dope 🔥

5 years ago

perrrty gooood

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5 years ago

hit it playa

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Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

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