Hi @jordonmooney!
Welcome to our feedback of 'hi my first '!
Nice meaning behind the track! Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track!
Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way.
The beat is fire, nice choice. Solid recording, nicely done!
Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Hi @jordonmooney! Welcome to our feedback of 'hi my first '! Nice meaning behind the track! Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. The beat is fire, nice choice. Solid recording, nicely done! Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team