Yo @jay.2157!
Waddup - let's take a look at 'bad'!
We liked the idea behind the track, keep workin' on your stories! Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! The beat is fire, nice choice.
Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix. Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Try improving your recording quality if you can.
Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Yo @jay.2157! Waddup - let's take a look at 'bad'! We liked the idea behind the track, keep workin' on your stories! Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! The beat is fire, nice choice. Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix. Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Try improving your recording quality if you can. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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