Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @liljizz69! Thanks for sharing 'Watterfall on ur door' with us! Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. This track is too short, please share something a bit longer so we can give proper feedback! Dope beat, really works for this track! It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

LilJizz69

3 years ago

in every man's life there comes a time yo momma masturbates a fucking swine aint got no money, aint got no time it's too late bro, pay the fucking fine I'm rambling a little, doesn't matter at all your girlfriend now has a waterfall i took her down to a goddamned mall got her a fur, then fucked her like a doll