Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo @jeremiahwilson.6980! Waddup - let's take a look at 'see you on the other side'! Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Great energy, such chill vibes. Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, you may wanna put it up a little. Practice writin' unique lyrics that will make your music really stand out. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Lilwarrior

3 years ago

sadness depression life is about obsession shit muh fucking tetris life is about damn obsession shit niggas always runnin from they problems when they should work on em dont make anyone make you cry just make sure to live your own life life is about you own personality turn to God have a better functionality fuck haters (fuck haters) fuck traitors damn haters i dont give a damn about traitors AYE pistol whip haters dont know shit what it feels like to get motherfucking dissed damn niggas always try to ruin lives time to make haters cry dumb niggas dont understand me always try to slam my dreams (slam my dreams) people try and make crying that aint stopping from rhyming no matter how many times they try and make cry that wont stop me from doing rhymes