3 Comments
Leave a comment
3 years ago
Hi @defie! Welcome to our feedback of '1st'! We liked the idea behind the track, keep workin' on your stories! Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. The beat is fire, nice choice. Your vocals are a little quiet, could you put 'em up a little bit? Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
3 years ago
if you liked it please sugest to your freinds
3 years ago
my diss track
You may also like