Hey @jjondatbeat!
Thanks for sharing 'Sum bout me' with us!
Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Good choice of beat!
Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. This track is too short, please share something a bit longer so we can give proper feedback!
Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Hey @jjondatbeat! Thanks for sharing 'Sum bout me' with us! Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Good choice of beat! Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. This track is too short, please share something a bit longer so we can give proper feedback! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
um why you askin?
Do you have an iPhone
I just started really
I love it you can rap girl
🔥🔥🔥🔥
um ok
thanks