pain
celestialgodd56 Plays
•29 May 2021
every day I'm hurting. every day im working. why these people acting fine I know that ur hurting why u always working 9 to 5 while u working bitching ya im smoking on that good shit. getting real lit overdose 23 times and im still lit why u talking shit not about it mind your own biz on that rap shit making music cuz it helps me cope year ago I was hooked on dope did a little bid violation probation got sexually assaulted in the system now I feel violated ima use this situation to get my self big ima make that money soon until then I still lit.
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Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Yo @kevinhenry00! Waddup - let's take a look at 'pain'! Your bars are dope, we like how you put 'em all together. Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix. Your rhyming is dope, it sounds real nice. We liked the idea behind the track, keep workin' on your stories! Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
good looks bro bro
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