Hi @rayrintoul!
Welcome to our feedback of 'Hawkeyes666'!
Nice meaning behind the track!
The vocals are a little unclear, you may wanna try recording closer to the mic to get a better sound. Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow.
The beat is fire, nice choice.
It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Hi @rayrintoul! Welcome to our feedback of 'Hawkeyes666'! Nice meaning behind the track! The vocals are a little unclear, you may wanna try recording closer to the mic to get a better sound. Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. The beat is fire, nice choice. It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team