Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @commenecijackson! Thanks for sharing 'da kid is on ' with us! We liked the idea behind the track, keep workin' on your stories! Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! The beat is fire, nice choice. Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Nicely done, you can feel the positivity coming from this track! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Commeneci Jackson

3 years ago

hi who are you I am I am I don't care but I'm talking to you you you you and you stop playing with me I'm rapping like a job but she decides to go on that ride to do when they're not I don't want that thing you don't want that be something about yourself you don't want that I just love it when I called him every character do you know the way AMC Theaters oh I'm giving you a message