Hi @45brezy!
Welcome to our feedback of 'bloods and guns album '!
Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! The beat is fire, nice choice.
Your vocals are a bit loud compared to the beat, put 'em down just a little for a perfect mix. Try workin' on rhymes to get a unique sound. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up.
Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Hi @45brezy! Welcome to our feedback of 'bloods and guns album '! Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! The beat is fire, nice choice. Your vocals are a bit loud compared to the beat, put 'em down just a little for a perfect mix. Try workin' on rhymes to get a unique sound. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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