My heart like Antarctica forever frozen solid,
N protectin hella secrets from becoming public knowledge//
aHad fun in college but financial aid was limited/
It’s just a fuckin scam, think we advanced but still primitive//
They’ll never let us live, create environments competitive/
N When I expose it all, most just call me negative//
Fools say I’m woke, but all I am is fuckin broke/
Like my bong, Toke, choke, like cheech n Chong I’m up in smoke//
Unprovoked assaults don’t know who’s fault it is/
Malt liquor paper bag, gram of wax got me crawling quick//
Back to the hood, copp sum good rocks clean em up/
Heat em up to Melt em down, let the cloud surround//
Like a sauna steamin up, bring me up, twacked out/
Marijuana in the blunt, light up bring me back down//
Feel more like a smack down than a comedown/
Either way staying with the rock like the rundown//
check me out bro 🤞🏼🤞🏼if u trynna collab checkout my bio. we goin up together
Bars: 9/10
Delivery: 9/10
Impression: 9/10
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Bars: 9/10
Delivery: 9/10
Impression: 9/10
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Impression: Dope 🔥
Hi @510cRo!
Welcome to our feedback of 'Ice Wall'!
Your vocals are the perfect level over the beat and are really clear, that's amazing! The bars and delivery are awesome, so many tight flows!! We think this track is dope and could be real popular!!
Submit more for instant feedback with us to see how you're progressing!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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My heart like Antarctica forever frozen solid, N protectin hella secrets from becoming public knowledge// aHad fun in college but financial aid was limited/ It’s just a fuckin scam, think we advanced but still primitive// They’ll never let us live, create environments competitive/ N When I expose it all, most just call me negative// Fools say I’m woke, but all I am is fuckin broke/ Like my bong, Toke, choke, like cheech n Chong I’m up in smoke// Unprovoked assaults don’t know who’s fault it is/ Malt liquor paper bag, gram of wax got me crawling quick// Back to the hood, copp sum good rocks clean em up/ Heat em up to Melt em down, let the cloud surround// Like a sauna steamin up, bring me up, twacked out/ Marijuana in the blunt, light up bring me back down// Feel more like a smack down than a comedown/ Either way staying with the rock like the rundown//
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
check me out bro 🤞🏼🤞🏼if u trynna collab checkout my bio. we goin up together Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Please check out my music and let me know what you think about it Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Hi @510cRo! Welcome to our feedback of 'Ice Wall'! Your vocals are the perfect level over the beat and are really clear, that's amazing! The bars and delivery are awesome, so many tight flows!! We think this track is dope and could be real popular!! Submit more for instant feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉
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