Yo @edatwar65!
Waddup - let's take a look at 'you ain't learning'!
We liked the idea behind the track, keep workin' on your stories!
Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, you may wanna put it up a little. Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up.
Dope beat, really works for this track!
Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
🏆🌲🔥🔥💲 Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Yo @edatwar65! Waddup - let's take a look at 'you ain't learning'! We liked the idea behind the track, keep workin' on your stories! Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, you may wanna put it up a little. Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Dope beat, really works for this track! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥