die tonight
Mason Quentrill73 Plays
•27 May 2021
look I'll eat u in yo sleep it will die in yo sleep I eat yo leftover body parts for breckes lun. when I go to bed I see body parts when I wake up I see body parts. u see me in the dark thats lassed thin u see before the light it them bright go to hell for I don't care I stare a u that means u gona die tonight. die tonight u will see the lights then go to hell for life.
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Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Hi @redkid1! Welcome to our feedback of 'die tonight '! Nice meaning behind the track! Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix. Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound. This track is too short, please share something a bit longer so we can give proper feedback! Good choice of beat! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
you got this son keep grinding you’ll get it down for sure sounds good Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
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