Hi @45brezy!
Welcome to our feedback of 'bloods and guns album'!
Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Dope beat, really works for this track!
Your vocals are a bit loud compared to the beat, put 'em down just a little for a perfect mix. Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow.
Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
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Hi @45brezy! Welcome to our feedback of 'bloods and guns album'! Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Dope beat, really works for this track! Your vocals are a bit loud compared to the beat, put 'em down just a little for a perfect mix. Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
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