Hey @kionbreed!
Thanks for sharing 'off the top' with us!
Your vocals are the perfect level over the beat, keep mixing like that. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. The rhyming is well put together.
Work on developing original bars to help your tracks shine through. Develop your story-telling to help your track shine through. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars.
The beat is fire, nice choice. Solid recording, nicely done!
Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Hey @kionbreed! Thanks for sharing 'off the top' with us! Your vocals are the perfect level over the beat, keep mixing like that. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. The rhyming is well put together. Work on developing original bars to help your tracks shine through. Develop your story-telling to help your track shine through. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. The beat is fire, nice choice. Solid recording, nicely done! Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team