make it quick

The real rap man

Author

5 years ago

make it quick cause we bout to make you quit yuh cause we so lit yuh petty boy yuh look like that super fat like a rat we gonna go rattan then you down yuh if we see you around town we gonna make frown yuh yuh gonna be there so you better run from town little clown and yo clown friends or we gonna take them down to you petty boy get out of town yuh make it quick cause we bout to make you quit yuh cause we so lit yuh petty boy yuh look like that super fat like a rat we gonna go rattan then you down yuh and then you down yuh if we see you around town we gonna make you frown yuh yuh gonna be. there so you better run from town little clown and yo clown friends or we gonna take them down to you petty boy get out of town

Rap Fame A&R

5 years ago

Hi @nicejobjay! Welcome to our feedback of 'make it quick '! Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. The beat is fire, nice choice. You've used a cool balance of clean and explicit language. Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix. Try workin' on rhymes to get a unique sound. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Try improving your recording quality if you can. Great energy, such chill vibes. Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

The real rap man

Author

5 years ago

ok thanks bro