Hey @sleepdasav!
Thanks for sharing '#bars' with us!
Your bars are dope, we like how you put 'em all together. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Your rhyming is dope, it sounds real nice.
Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up.
Nice meaning behind the track! Nice flow here - delivery is so important. The beat is fire, nice choice. Awesome energy in your delivery, nicely done!
Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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something raw from just playin around
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Hey @sleepdasav! Thanks for sharing '#bars' with us! Your bars are dope, we like how you put 'em all together. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Your rhyming is dope, it sounds real nice. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Nice meaning behind the track! Nice flow here - delivery is so important. The beat is fire, nice choice. Awesome energy in your delivery, nicely done! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Great 🎉
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
HEAT 🥵
Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉