Make it.[Lil rockstar]

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Wake up in the morning, And I'm down bad, Look around the room, And the feeling’s sad, Touch up on my pockets, Gotta make some cash, Call my bro up quick, Come get me fast, Say he got somethings, On his mind to do, Give him about an hour, Then he's coming through, Heard him beep the horn, Then I ran out, Money on my mind, No more handouts, Get my pen and pad, I'm about to write some more, Hit that stage then tell them, Turn the lights down low, Open up my mouth, I heard the crowd scream go, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, Yeah.

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Lil rockstar

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5 years ago

Bo Jangles

5 years ago

Please check out my music and let me know what you think about it Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

bjaydee333

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉

Ziplok

5 years ago

🔥🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆🔥🔥 Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Rap Fame A&R

5 years ago

Hey @lover14! Thanks for sharing 'Make it.[Lil rockstar]' with us! Your vocals are a great volume in the mix, but they're a little unclear, you may play around with your distance from the mic! Your bars are dope, we like how you put 'em all together. Awesome delivery, so many tight flows!! We think this track is awesome and could be a hit!! Submit more music for instant feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

SOVEREIGN-T

5 years ago

@rapfame_ar_team any reinforcing comments for the young ambitious artist?

SOVEREIGN-T

5 years ago

@lover14 i sent already

SOVEREIGN-T

5 years ago

killed the slow flow, perfect vocal pitch_ with clear sound. keep this drive. hustle and promote

Lil rockstar

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5 years ago