Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo farawayface! Waddup - let's take a look at 'Gunshots '! Dope idea, we enjoyed the storyline of the track! Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix! Practice writin' unique lyrics that will make your music really stand out! Unfortunately the recordin' hasn't come out too well, perhaps you could try recordin' in a quieter place. Some more natural charisma put into your delivery would help get your message across to a wider audience! Great positivity, listeners like to feel good about 'emselves. Thanks again for sharing, it was dope listening to your music! Share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

faraway_face

3 years ago

Gunshots in the night time they help me fall asleep the perfect lullaby gunshots no thoughts just memories of you and me those were the days I look back I feel I’m in a haze from night to day gunshots down the street I go all the way just to see if your okay I see you with her and not me oh the memories are the only thing that’s keeping me from gunshots in the night time they help me fall asleep the perfect melody gunshots straight through my head I keep seeing you and her and your bed why me you said I was wifey you couldn’t live without me but baby your killing me your love was like nicotine it’s addicting it made me feel something now all I feel is nothing oh gunshots in the night time they help me fall asleep the worst memories remind me of gunshots in the night time they keep me awake the worst harmony oh gunshots.