Hi magnotwoten!
Welcome to our feedback of 'fatt fuck'!
Dope idea, we enjoyed the storyline of the track! You've used explicit language in a restrained way, which is dope.
Your vocals are a little quiet, could you put 'em up a little bit? Try workin' on the bars to get a fresh lyrical sound! Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way! The recordin' quality is quite low, it would be great to clean it up, perhaps by being in a quieter place to record. Some more natural charisma put into your delivery would help get your message across to a wider audience!
Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Hi magnotwoten! Welcome to our feedback of 'fatt fuck'! Dope idea, we enjoyed the storyline of the track! You've used explicit language in a restrained way, which is dope. Your vocals are a little quiet, could you put 'em up a little bit? Try workin' on the bars to get a fresh lyrical sound! Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way! The recordin' quality is quite low, it would be great to clean it up, perhaps by being in a quieter place to record. Some more natural charisma put into your delivery would help get your message across to a wider audience! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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