Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo davidsalazar.9987! Waddup - let's take a look at 'Bay-Z (13:35)'! Dope idea, we enjoyed the storyline of the track! Solid recordin', nicely done! Your voice sounds a bit fuzzy, could you try recordin' closer to the mic? Work on developing original bars to help your tracks shine through! Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound! Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars! Some more natural charisma put into your delivery would help get your message across to a wider audience! Thanks again for sharing, it was dope listening to your music! Share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

David Salazar

3 years ago

for this i shall truley ride oh forgive me if if im just to damit the hell blunt ohh wee ohh well yea i can hear the fallen Angels screaming well just mad from the depths if owell Damn right i think my head is starting to swell. oh y do they bother id rather nod y rather odd dam right i write my own shit the ghost writer in the night uae to sit back in write as i scream at the demons in my cell oh this.Be truley hell dam but who am i to say im just super dave or stuoerdave yea i watch em slumber hmm oh y they mummet yea i heard em stutter mind shift mind roc yo ya body roc i am the smoking gun right now the hot tooic yo God is real please be my steal yo make it so i will never break but i well levetae as i elluminate in the dark yes the darkness in the blck logan oh yea i see the room raider in the room strike em dwn with my double edge blade thus here be my swim