Hi ozunacruzz!
Welcome to our feedback of 'yah'!
Your vocals are the perfect volume, nicely done!
Try workin' on the bars to get a fresh lyrical sound! Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through! Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics!
We liked the idea behind the track, keep workin' on your narrative rapping! The recordin' is of a good quality, we can hear each individual element.
Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Hi ozunacruzz! Welcome to our feedback of 'yah'! Your vocals are the perfect volume, nicely done! Try workin' on the bars to get a fresh lyrical sound! Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through! Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics! We liked the idea behind the track, keep workin' on your narrative rapping! The recordin' is of a good quality, we can hear each individual element. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
good job