Raheim Johnson

3 years ago

@rapfame_ar_team preciate it... first time recording myself so I was kinda nervous but I'll definitely keep what u said in mind THANKS

Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey raheimjohnson! Thanks for sharing 'Playtime' with us! Your vocals are the perfect volume, nicely done! Try workin' on the bars to get a fresh lyrical sound! Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars! Putting a little more energy into how you deliver your lyrics would bring out more of your track's strength! We liked the idea behind the track, keep workin' on your narrative rapping! The recordin' is solid, everything is clear. Submit more music for instant feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

TMBeatZ

3 years ago

@raheimjohnson #tmJustAHorrorShow #tmTrippinSuBmission