Yo darklord063!
Waddup - let's take a look at 'Broken'!
We liked the idea behind the track, keep workin' on your narrative rapping!
Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix! Practice writin' unique lyrics that will make your music really stand out! Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars! Putting a little more energy into how you deliver your lyrics would bring out more of your track's strength!
The recordin' is of a good quality, we can hear each individual element.
Thanks again for sharing, it was dope listening to your music!
Share with us again for instant feedback!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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New rapper, well I tried something random but yeah. ENJOY!
Thanks, I'll keep trying 👍 Really appreciate the feedback.
Yo darklord063! Waddup - let's take a look at 'Broken'! We liked the idea behind the track, keep workin' on your narrative rapping! Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix! Practice writin' unique lyrics that will make your music really stand out! Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars! Putting a little more energy into how you deliver your lyrics would bring out more of your track's strength! The recordin' is of a good quality, we can hear each individual element. Thanks again for sharing, it was dope listening to your music! Share with us again for instant feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team