Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo jamessaintgenesis! Waddup - let's take a look at 'test of take me away'! Your bars are dope, we like how you put 'em all together. Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, you may wanna put it up a little! Unfortunately the recordin' hasn't come out too well, perhaps you could try recordin' with a different set up. We like the rhyming, it's tight! Dope storytelling, we love this track!! We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

TMBeatZ

3 years ago

@jamessaintgenesis #tmTrippinSuBmission

James Genesis

3 years ago

yh yh please take me away am dying am breaking I just wish I cud fly away my hearts aching I can't shake this feeling I can't take can someone help take this pain away set me free please my hearts been broken by a women who says she loves me then she abandons me and I now am dying all she does is start lying she's a funking tease shes acting like a sleez everytime I think I freeze in the the relationship its me that makes the effort it's me that sees so help me please what shud I do I cant take it it burns when I remember ever thing I treasured because of the twists and turns u lost your way our time was good but then u turned bitter I wanna go back when everything was sweeter and better I think we went well till you thought u were clever so please go don't stay please someone take my pain away