Yo lauriecharland!
Waddup - let's take a look at 'acceptance'!
The beat is dope, nice choice.
Work on developing original bars to help your tracks shine through! Try workin' on rhymes to get a unique, new sound! Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way!
Solid recordin', nicely done!
Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Yo lauriecharland! Waddup - let's take a look at 'acceptance'! The beat is dope, nice choice. Work on developing original bars to help your tracks shine through! Try workin' on rhymes to get a unique, new sound! Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way! Solid recordin', nicely done! Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
@lauriecharland beautiful song
@lauriecharland #tmTrippin
smooth song💯