gingerbeard man verse
this won't be the only time imagine everybody that be there beside you be watching over you like eagles and hawks who don't know what to say bout me and my crew they'll try and change every choice that you choose locking people up for any break in the rules sentenced to life they make you think of how to break through the bars of steel and courtrooms shitty chance you'll never see anything that they do. I think they're done now let's get this straight hear me out the cheat sheet, apes bananas teaching see , having thoughts of rap dreams, making words that hit beats hitting me a note streak, words of sudden doubts sink, rise above your rap sheet trees bees rippin trees leaves, eco friendly or the trees 6feet deep its a sweet feast needles pointy with a sting. shelled up like a seed, gripped make it clean, germ an plant me in the scene it's honestly astonishing how many down to frown on me red head freckled face kid with some honesty it's lifting and it's counseling, don't give up on any dreams give yourself some room to breathe fate would have us all believe we stuck not today not again I won't give in to hate or dread i will rise above ya I will rise again i will rise above ya I will rise again i will rise above I will rise again
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this won't be the only time imagine everybody that be there beside you be watching over you like eagles and hawks who don't know what to say bout me and my crew they'll try and change every choice that you choose locking people up for any break in the rules sentenced to life they make you think of how to break through the bars of steel and courtrooms shitty chance you'll never see anything that they do. I think they're done now let's get this straight hear me out the cheat sheet, apes bananas teaching see , having thoughts of rap dreams, making words that hit beats hitting me a note streak, words of sudden doubts sink, rise above your rap sheet trees bees rippin trees leaves, eco friendly or the trees 6feet deep its a sweet feast needles pointy with a sting. shelled up like a seed, gripped make it clean, germ an plant me in the scene it's honestly astonishing how many down to frown on me red head freckled face kid with some honesty it's lifting and it's counseling, don't give up on any dreams give yourself some room to breathe fate would have us all believe we stuck not today not again I won't give in to hate or dread i will rise above ya I will rise again i will rise above ya I will rise again i will rise above I will rise again
🔝 of the 🌄 buddy. I appreciate your support. I woke up to dam early. Bout to grab a lil mo 💤. I'll get at Cha soon. This is a 🚒 🔥 track you did.
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Great 🎉
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Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Hey @spginkz, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'gingerbeard man verse '! 💥 Just bring that vocal volume down a bit and you'll see an improvement in the mix quality. Great rhyme skills, you got the poetry flowin'! Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. 🎶 Try improving your recording quality if you can. Great hype portrayed in this track, can really feel the energy! 🥵 So much energy without sparing the intricate bars, keep it up. Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
#4kSWYPEZ Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
At the top of your game, proving it yet again! 🤘 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥